一、高考仿真原题(书信,环保主题)
原题题目及要求
假定你是红星中学高三学生李华。今年世界地球日的主题为 “Planet vs. Plastics”,你校将举办相关活动。你的笔友 Jim 发来邮件,询问该活动的情况。请你用英文给他回复。
内容包括:
1. 活动内容;
2. 你的任务。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
题型分析:新高考高频环保类应用文,聚焦环境保护、减少塑料污染、绿色生活意识。设问逻辑:介绍校园活动→个人任务,贴合人与自然和谐共生的立德树人命题导向,场景真实,适配高考全国卷及各省市新高考卷。
二、主题常用词语(分基础 / 进阶,分层提分)
(一)基础必会词汇(初级范文专用,简单稳妥)
World Earth Day 世界地球日 plastic pollution 塑料污染 cut down on plastics 减少塑料 raise one’s environmental awareness 提高环保意识 give a speech 做演讲 put up posters 张贴海报 reuse plastic bags 重复使用塑料袋 protect our planet 保护我们的地球 take action 采取行动
(二)进阶高分词汇(中高级范文专用,地道书面)
themed “Planet vs. Plastics” 主题为 “Planet vs. Plastics”; fight against plastic pollution 对抗塑料污染 call on sb. to do sth. 号召某人做某事 reduce single use plastics 减少一次性塑料制品 spread eco friendly ideas 传播环保理念 live a low carbon life 过低碳生活 arouse students’ concern for the environment 唤起学生的环境关切 make a difference 产生影响
三、高分万能语句(开篇 + 活动介绍 + 个人任务 + 结尾)
(一)承接开篇句
1. I’m glad you’re curious about our school’s activities for World Earth Day. 很高兴你对我校世界地球日的活动感兴趣。
2. Thanks for your email asking about our upcoming activities for World Earth Day. 感谢你的邮件。询问我校即将开展的世界地球日活动。
(二)介绍活动内容核心句
1. A series of activities will be held, whose theme is “Planet vs. Plastics”. 我校将举办一系列主题为 “星球对抗塑料污染” 的活动。
2. We will hold lectures and poster shows to warn students of the harm caused by plastic pollution. 我们会举办讲座和海报展。提醒学生塑料污染带来的危害。
(三)个人任务 & 感悟升华句
1. My main task is to put up posters and call on my schoolmates to cut down on single use plastics. 我的主要任务是张贴海报。号召同学们减少使用一次性塑料制品。
2. Small actions can make a big difference to our planet. 微小的行动可以给我们的星球带来巨大改变。
四、梯度范文(初级 / 中级 / 高级)
✅ 初级范文(约 96 词,极简句型,基础零错)
Dear Jim, Thanks for your email asking about our school’s activities for World Earth Day.
This year’s theme is “Planet vs. Plastics”. Our school will hold several activities. We will attend environmental speeches and view poster shows about plastic pollution. These activities show us the harm plastics do and encourage us to protect our earth.
My task is to put up posters around our campus. I will also remind my classmates to use fewer plastic items and reuse plastic bags. I hope more students will take action to protect our planet.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Hua
中文翻译: 亲爱的 Jim: 感谢你的邮件,询问我校世界地球日的活动。
今年的主题是 “星球对抗塑料污染”。我校将举办几项活动。我们会参加环保讲座,观看关于塑料污染的海报展。这些活动向我们展示塑料带来的危害,并鼓励我们保护地球。
我的任务是在校园内张贴海报。我也会提醒同学们少用塑料制品,重复使用塑料袋。我希望更多同学行动起来保护我们的星球。
期待你的回信。 李华
点评:全部基础词汇、简单句与并列句;完整覆盖 “活动内容、个人任务” 两大要点;时态统一,无复杂语法,适合基础薄弱学生。
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✅ 中级范文(约 99 词,句式升级,衔接流畅,高考高分)
Dear Jim, Thanks for your email, in which you asked about our school’s activities for World Earth Day.
With the theme “Planet vs. Plastics”, a series of environmental activities will take place in our school. We will attend themed lectures and visit poster exhibitions。 learning about the severe harm plastic pollution brings to our planet.
As for my task, I will put up posters and call on my schoolmates to cut down on single use plastics. Besides。 I plan to spread eco friendly ideas on campus. I believe small actions can make a real difference.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Hua
中文翻译: 亲爱的 Jim: 感谢你的邮件,你在信中询问我校世界地球日的相关活动。
以 “星球对抗塑料污染” 为主题,我校将开展一系列环保活动。我们会参加主题讲座,参观海报展览,了解塑料污染给地球带来的严重危害。
至于我的任务,我会张贴海报,号召同学们减少一次性塑料的使用。此外,我计划在校园传播环保理念。我相信小小的行动可以带来实实在在的改变。
期待你的回信。 李华
点评:运用非限制性定语从句、现在分词作伴随状语等中档语法;衔接自然,词汇进阶地道;要点完整,逻辑清晰,考场可拿到 14 + 分数。
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✅ 高级范文(约 101 词,语法高级,立意拔高)
Dear Jim, I’m delighted to receive your email asking about our school’s activities for World Earth Day.
Centered on the theme “Planet vs. Plastics”。 our school will launch various environmental events。 including themed lectures and poster displays。 to raise students’ awareness of plastic pollution and its threats to our planet.
My responsibilities include putting up posters and advocating cutting down on single use plastics among schoolmates. Furthermore。 I will encourage peers to adopt low carbon lifestyles. only through joint efforts can we better protect our home planet.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Hua
中文翻译: 亲爱的 Jim: 很高兴收到你的邮件,你向我询问我校世界地球日的活动。
围绕 “星球对抗塑料污染” 这一主题,我校将开展多样环保活动,包括主题讲座与海报展示,以此提升同学们对于塑料污染及其环境威胁的认识。
我的任务包括张贴海报,倡导同学们减少一次性塑料使用。此外,我会鼓励身边同学践行低碳生活方式。只有通过共同努力,我们才能更好地保护地球家园。
期待你的回信。 李华
点评:分词作状语、倒装句、高级书面搭配运用娴熟,长短句错落;紧扣环保行动、青年责任,逻辑闭环,无句型堆砌,达到高分水准。
五、写作提分小结
基础档:基础词汇 + 简单句,覆盖全部要点,格式规范,语法拼写无误,适合直接背诵,稳拿基础分。
中档:善用从句、非谓语,优化衔接,词汇升级;行文流畅,说理自然,摆脱模板生硬,稳定提分。
高分档:高级句型灵活运用,表达地道精炼;紧扣青年环保责任,立意深刻,契合高考立德树人高分标准。



